Fencing Illustration board

The first assignment in my Concept Development II class was to take a sport and make a small clothing collection inspired by it. I was to make 3 complete outfits in all. What was turned in were 3 boards I assembled and then presented to the class, before submitting them to the instructor.

This is the second board, the Illustration board. Here I have the 3 complete outfits I've chosen from my preliminary sketches. I've then put them on posed croquis and illustrated them with Prismacolor markers and pencils. I then scanned them in and edited them in photoshop, cleaning them up and all.

From left to right, a vest with a knit shirt and hakama pants, an asymmetrical coat with a large poofy shirt and some baggy pants, and the third is an asymmetrical jacket with a slim fitting shirt and slim pants. The slim jacket and pants have chunks of chainmaile sewn onto them and the knit shirt and asymmetrical coat have chainmaile elbow patches (however, these aren't visible in these poses).

I think what I would like to change most if I did would be the post of the figure in the middle, so you can see more of his complete outfit, instead of just the coat and a bit of his sleeve....